Little Fables

Cut by a garden spade,worm thought it's a disgrace
To propagate himself right in a public place.
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- You, Monkey, are smarter then me, I admit,-
Agreed Crocodile...and swallowed it.
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Miss Bear got married and only then
She offered her husband a sleep in the den.
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When Elephant said:"If You were in my shoes",
He was innerrupted: "They would be too loose".
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A Donkey works hard not for money or fame,
Instead he is called an unprintable name.
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Тема: Re: Little Fables Виктория Серебро

Автор Шрейбер Б.

Дата: 23-03-2008 | 13:59:12

Очень симпатично, Вика.
Маленькие опечаточки: должно быть loose, а не looze, и Donkey, а не Donrey.